Petrarch, outstepping from the shady green, His eyes from her sweet face. Most happy they! 390 Of out-spread wings, and from between them shone These lines; and howsoever they be done, 400 KNOWING Within myself the manner in which this Poem has been produced, it is not without a feeling of regret that I make it public. What manner I mean, will be quite clear to the reader, who must soon perceive great inexperience, immaturity, and every error denoting a feverish attempt, rather than a deed accomplished. The two first books, and indeed the two last, I feel sensible are not of such completion as to warrant their passing the press; nor should they if I thought a year's castigation would do them any good;-it will not: the foundations are too sandy. It is just that this youngster should die away: a sad thought for me, if I had not some hope that while it is dwindling I may be plotting, and fitting myself for verses fit to live. This may be speaking too presumptuously, and may deserve a punishment: but no feeling man will be forward to inflict it: he will leave me alone, with the conviction that there is not a fiercer hell than the failure in a great object. This is not written with the least atom of purpose to forestall criticisms of course, but from the desire I have to conciliate men who are competent to look, and who do look with a zealous eye, to the honour of English literature. The imagination of a boy is healthy, and the mature imagination of a man is healthy; but there is a space of life between, in which the soul is in a ferment, the character undecided, the way of life uncertain, the ambition thick-sighted: thence proceeds mawkishness, and all the thousand bitters which those men I speak of must necessarily taste in going over the following pages. I hope I have not in too late a day touched the beautiful mythology of Greece, and dulled its brightness: for I wish to try once more', before I bid it farewell. TEIGNMOUTH, April 10, 1818. 1 Woodhouse notes-This alluded to his then intention of writing a poem on the fall of Hyperion. He commenced this poem but, thanks to the critics who fell foul of this work, he discontinued it. The fragment was published in 1820. ENDYMION BOOK I A THING of beauty is a joy for ever: Full of sweet dreams, and health, and quiet breathing. For simple sheep; and such are daffodils 10 With the green world they live in; and clear rills 20 1 The manuscript shows no variation in the opening line; but the late Sir Benjamin Ward Richardson told me that Mr. Henry Stephens of Finchley, who was a fellow student in medicine with Keats, and lived in the same rooms with him for a time, recollected an earlier first line. Keats is said to have written in some rough draft of his intended opening A thing of beauty is a constant joy: Stephens, on hearing this, pronounced it a fine line, but wanting something.' Keats pondered it over, and at length broke out with an inspired 'I have it,' and set down the household word that now stands at the head of the poem. 13 Instead of line 13 there were originally three lines in the manuscript : From our dark Spirits, and before us dances Like glitter on the points of Arthur's Lances. Of these bright powers are the Sun, and Moon... |