SPECIMEN OF AN INDUCTION TO A POEM. Lo! I must tell a tale of chivalry; For large white plumes are dancing in mine eye. Lo! I must tell a tale of chivalry; For while I muse, the lance points slantingly 5 IO Hunt speaks confidently of this and the next composition as connected—“The Specimen of an Induction to a Poem, and the fragment of the Poem itself entitled Calidore" (see Appendix); and this view is borne out, not only by internal evidence, but by the fact that in a volume of transcripts made in a copy-book of Tom Keats's these two compositions are written continuously, the first headed simply Induction, and the second Calidore. Several passages are marked in the margin; and at the end of Calidore is written, "Marked by Leigh Hunt-1816." Hunt's marking resulted in the disappearance of one bad rhyme, for in the transcript line 17 stands thus : And now no more her anxious grief remembring and the last word in line 18 is underlined by Hunt. Some minor VOL. I. C Athwart the morning air: some lady sweet, And from her own pure self no joy dissembling, With the young ashen boughs, 'gainst which it rests, Ah! shall I ever tell its cruelty, 15 20 When the fire flashes from a warrior's eye, 25 30 35 Is slung with shining cuirass, sword, and shield? Where ye may see a spur in bloody field. 40 variations are: say for think in line 8, his for its in lines 9 and 10, grandeur for splendour in line 35, this bright spear for that bright lance in line 37, and you for ye in line 40. Or stand in courtly talk by fives and sevens: Or wherefore comes that steed so proudly by? Spenser! thy brows are arched, open, kind, 45 50 55 Be jealous that the foot of other wight Should madly follow that bright path of light 60 Trac'd by thy lov'd Libertas; he will speak, And tell thee that my prayer is very meek; That I will follow with due reverence, And start with awe at mine own strange pretence. 65 To see wide plains, fair trees and lawny slope : (44) The transcript reads which for that. (46) In previous editions, knight; but in a copy of the 1817 volume bearing on the title-page an inscription in Keats's writing, the word steed is substituted in manuscript for knight. The transcript also reads steed. (57) The transcript reads gentle for tender. (59) The transcript has living in place of other. (61) Libertas means Leigh Hunt. See page 54. CALIDORE. A Fragment. YOUNG Calidore is paddling o'er the lake; His healthful spirit eager and awake Which seem'd full loath this happy world to leave; And show their blossoms trim. Scarce can his clear and nimble eye-sight follow The freaks, and dartings of the black-wing'd swallow, Delighting much, to see it half at rest, Dip so refreshingly its wings, and breast 'Gainst the smooth surface, and to mark anon, The widening circles into nothing gone. And now the sharp keel of his little boat Comes up with ripple, and with easy float, 20 In the transcript in Tom Keats's copy-book we read clear for cool in line 6, was for is in line 8, which for that in line 10, his for its in line 16. And glides into a bed of water lillies: Broad leav'd are they and their white canopies The sidelong view of swelling leafiness, The lonely turret, shatter'd, and outworn, The little chapel with the cross above (28) In the transcript, line 28 reads And light blue Mountains. But sure no breathing man and in line 29 an stands in place of and. (40) In the transcript this and the next line stand thus:— Its long lost grandeur. Laburnums grow around And bow their golden honors to the ground. (42) In the transcript, its cross. (44) The transcript reads window; the first edition, windows. 25 30 35 40 |