And thus to be cast out, thus lorn to die, Is sure enough to make a mortal man 960 Grow impious." So he inwardly began On things for which no wording can be found; Deeper and deeper sinking, until drown'd Beyond the reach of music: for the choir Of Cynthia he heard not, though rough briar 965 Nor muffling thicket interpos'd to dull What wouldst thou ere we all are laid on bier?" 970 (955) Cancelled reading of the manuscript, And by Promethean... This was probably rejected to get rid of the repetition of the word by. (956) The draft reads And by old Saturn's single forelock... (967) The draft reads prelude for vesper. (968) It is worth noting that, when writing out the fair copy, Keats made three several attempts to spell this word aisles rightly, having first written it isles, then ailes and lastly aisles. (974-7) The draft reads as follows: Her brother kiss'd her, and his lady's hand Press'd, saying: "Sister, I would have command, 1 975 980 985 990 Thou shouldst, my love, by some unlook'd for change Be spiritualiz'd. Peona, we shall range These forests, and to thee they safe shall be As was thy cradle; hither shalt thou flee 995 To meet us many a time." Next Cynthia bright 1000 (984-6) In the draft thus : Her long black hair swell'd ampler, while it turned (997-8) In the finished manuscript the word kist occurs twice in these two lines instead of kiss'd as in the first edition; but bless'd is not similarly transformed to blest. Before three swiftest kisses he had told, They vanish'd far away!-Peona went Home through the gloomy wood in wonderment. THE END. (1003) At the end of the draft Keats wrote "Burford Bridge Nov. 28. 1817—". |